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IELTS Writing

오늘 샘플 라이팅 주제는 잡오퍼 거절 입니다. 

회사에 지원을 한 후 합격한 상태에서 다시 그 제안을 거절하는 편지를 쓰는 내용인데요~

면접을 준비하고 진행하느라 소요된 시간고 에너지 등에 대해서 고맙고 미안하다는 인사를 전하는 편지 입니다. 

비록 거절하는 내용이지만 예의를 갖추어서 거절이유를 나열해 주시면 된답니다. 

이 편지에서는 현재 고용주와의 관계를 저버릴 수 없어 직장을 바꾸지 않기로 결정했다는 이유를 댔네요.

이 외에도 다른 직장에서 높은 연봉을 제시했다던지, 이사를 가게되어서 지원한 직장에 출퇴근이 어려워졌다든지 여러가지 이유가 있을 수 있겠죠 ^^

Sample Writing

IELTS Writing Task General (Task 1) 

Sample 1 1. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to Explain the reason why you decline the offer 1. Express your gratitude 2. Explain you like your current job very much. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir, model answer:

 model answer: 

Dear Sir,

I was a potential employee to whom you made a job offer. I would like to extend my thanks for such an offer, especially at such a company as yours. It is, however, with the deepest regret that I must decline your generous invitation and apologize for any inconvenience I may have caused. 

I appreciate immensely the interview organized by your company and the extensive effort made by all the staff involved. Their attitude was impressive and highly commendable. As such I must pass my sincerest apologies for any difficulties related to the extra work that must have been involved, and the time wasted on your behalf.

Although the offer was substantial, it wasn’t enough to encourage me to sever the bonds with my current employer. During my time at my present company, my superiors supported me and fostered my career. In short, they made me the employee I am today.

I would like to keep the lines of communication open between our two parties, and look forward to further correspondence.

Yours sincerely

Erin Do

(174 words)