아이엘츠 라이팅 샘플 - 학교에서의 디지털 기기 사용

IELTS Writing

오늘 샘플 라이팅 주제는 

교실에서의 디지털 기기 사용에 동의하는지 아닌지에 대한 내용입니다. 

찬성하든 반대하든 어떤 의견을 제시해도 상관은 없지만

타당한 이유나 예시를 들 수 있는 의견으로 정해서

서술하면 되겠습니다. 

예시 답안에서는 디지털 기기의 사용의 긍정적인 면이 더 많다고 주장했고

그 이유는 손글씨보다 알아보기 쉬운 디지털 문서는 오해를 줄일 수 있다고 하면서

의사들의 손글씨가 의료사고를 초래할 수 있다는 예시를 들었네요

Sample 

IELTS Writing  Task 2

 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

 model answer: 

Nowadays modern technology has totally changed our approach to study. In many countries students no longer have to copy notes by hand from the blackboard; instead, the teacher gives them a photocopy. Rather than messy ink and pen, students present a typed-up copy of their assignments. Their computer even checks their spelling as they go. 

In fact, some people believe that modern technology does a lot of our thinking for us and, as a result, we are going to lose our ability to think for ourselves.

In my opinion, spelling skills have definitely deteriorated in recent years. So many young people use mobile phones to send text messages where speed and conciseness are more important than spelling or grammar. Some teachers complain that these students take the same attitude toward their assignments.

On the other hand, typed assignments are much easier to read and are much neater. Frankly, I find some notes or texts which are handwritten almost impossible to read. Doctors, for example, have a reputation for illegible handwriting, which could lead to disastrous medical mistakes. Perhaps it is time we focused not on handwriting but on presenting information as accurately as possible.

One advantage of computers is that access to the Internet has opened up a new world of learning for us. We no longer have to wait for a book that has already been borrowed from the library before we do our research. In fact, the Internet can clearly be used to research information in the same way as a library but more conveniently.

On the whole, rather than holding students back, I believe modern technology has actually improved standards of education considerably.

 

(276 words)