아이엘츠 샘플 라이팅 - 대체에너지

IELTS Writing

오늘 샘플 라이팅 주제는 

대체에너지 개발에 대한 자신의 의견을 적는 것입니다.

40분 동안 주어진 주제에 관한 자신의 생각을 적으면 되는데요

정부에서 대체에너지 개발을 위해 어느 정도까지 노력을 기울여야 하는지

이유와 예시 등을 구체적으로 들어서 내용을 구성하라는 지시문대로

예시를 잘 떠올려서 주장을 펼치면 되겠습니다. ^^

Sample Writing

IELTS Writing Task 2  

 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?   Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words.

 model answer: 

It has been known for some time now that a move towards sources of energy which are not carbon-based is urgently required to stop the effects of global warming. In my view, there are too few governments who seem to be promoting the use of other types of energy such as wind, wave, solar and nuclear sources of energy.

 

Governments at present are too reliant on coal, oil and gas. Although some governments are doing research into the use of alternative energy sources, many are not. Energy from the wind, the sea and the sun does not pollute the environment and is an everlasting source of power. Nuclear power is clean, and although it is not totally unproblematic, it would provide a large amount of energy and dramatically improve the environment. Countries such as France have made good use of nuclear power.

 

My feeling is that more use could be made of wind power. In some countries, there has been a reluctance to use wind turbines, even in areas which are not densely populated, as some people believe they are eyesores. Personally, I believe they are not only useful but beautiful as well. Governments should spend more time and effort promoting the benefits of this source of energy and trying to make the public understand the reason for change.

 

In conclusion, I believe that if governments forced everyone to have a wind turbine and solar panels on the building they live in, made more use of wave power and built more nuclear power stations, then they would manage to avert

the dangers that are seriously threatening the Earth.

 

(268 words)